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Dawn of the Damned [Page 3]
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Post by
Patty
Flying, nice. :)
Another good Cliffhanger...
I take it Raela will now be the main protagonist or do you think you'll be continuing both of the stories simultaneously? Either way it would work well.
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Dralas
Still waiting to find out what the goal of each character is O.O
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Patty
So should i post my new story or not?
If you want to, go ahead. If I told you that you should roast yourself alive would you do it? I doubt it. Go at your own pace with it.
Post by
Adamsm
As always, nice read flying.
Post by
Morec0
Well written. But is that section with Instructor Willard a flashback? If so you might want to put it in italics or something to help show that.
EDIT: Btw, Flying, I like the character idea of Nalor Firewalker. Add him to my
character suggestion
page if you want to, it would help me remember him
if
I choose to use him.
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236602
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Post by
Morec0
Well written. But is that section with Instructor Willard a flashback? If so you might want to put it in italics or something to help show that.
EDIT: Btw, Flying, I like the character idea of Nalor Firewalker. Add him to my
character suggestion
page if you want to, it would help me remember him
if
I choose to use him.
No, the part with Instructor Williard isn't a flashback. Oh, glad you liked Nalor, I'll add him to the character suggestion page then =]
Ah, I just noticed the difference betwee Raelin and Ralea. lol.
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236602
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Patty
So, I guessed right. I liked the dual-narrative feature, but if you uphold the quality to what it has been in the past, it should be good.
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Morec0
So, I guessed right. I liked the dual-narrative feature, but if you uphold the quality to what it has been in the past, it should be good.
QFT.
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