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Shadows of Honor (Part 2)
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Morec0
- The town was very much of high elf origin. The structures showed clear signs that of their architecture, but it was changed, meshed with human construction as well. It was a strange sight; Soth had always figured the two races to keep their building designs to themselves.
- She shook her head, that wasn’t important, though. Her goal here was one that did not require her to dwell on such thoughts.
- She walked through the streets, heeding the tauren’s advice to keep the summons where all could see. She saw no one, though, only shadows that moved with a life of their own. Only faint whisperings that came from all around.
- Before her stood the spire, a massive construction that looked as if it had been destroyed and reconstructed with human materials throughout the years. The bottom of the spire reached on for well over twelve yards in diameter. Even so, it looked structurally sound, and it had a great aura of evil around it.
- No, not evil,
power
.
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Dark
.
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Unequaled
.
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Power
.
- Soth smiled and walked into the spire, shadows floating around, going by the nearby forge, anvils, and other portions of the room that seemed to be dedicated to various professions. They didn’t harm her, but they didn’t leave her alone either. They passed close to her, and she felt the chill radiating off of them.
- She shrugged it off, though, and began the climb upward after she reached the stairwell - in her rush ignoring the four circles that were arranged in a square shape in the middle of the floor behind her.
- The staircase that led to the top of the spire – although only accessible through the ground floor itself – was completely on the outside of the spire. As she climbed she noticed two other doors.
- Through one there seemed to be some kind of mess hall, the second revealed what seemed to be me a mostly empty room with metal rings hanging from the ceiling.
- As Soth climbed higher she placed her hand on the railing as she climbed higher, the lack of atmosphere starting to affect her. Finally she reached the top, and walked into what appeared to be some kind of high elf throne room.
- At first she saw no one, nothing but shadows then a shape appeared at the far end of the room. It was an Forsaken in dark leather armor, he was seated upon a throne that looked like it might have one belong to elven royalty.
- With a deep breath she approached the living corpse.
Post by
Orranis
That's cool, and I love your writing, but one thing. STOP USING THE GOD DAMNED "-"!
There has to be at least one Shadow Ascendant in this. Oh, and the Troll Shadow Hunter/ Dark Ranger. If there isn't , GTFO.
Post by
Morec0
That's cool, and I love your writing, but one thing. STOP USING THE GOD DAMNED "-"!
There has to be at least one Shadow Ascendant in this. Oh, and the Troll Shadow Hunter/ Dark Ranger. If there isn't , GTFO.
Shadow Ascendant(or at least very close to):
Incorperal (Talent)- Release your ghostly from from your body for 30 seconds, decreasing damage done to you and regenerating 2% percent of your health over 30 seconds. While outside of your body, your ghostly form has a set of abilities to use against enemies. The effects of this ability can be canclled at any time.
Phase: Your ghostly from becomes immune to damage for 10 seconds.
Wail: You let out an ear peircing wail, lowering the hit rating of all nearby enemies in a 10 yard radius by 10 for 15 seconds.
Icy Claws: Slash at your target, dealing up to 20% weapon damage and healing yourself for half of it.
And we've got all those shadows floating around.
Shadow Hunter:
Remember who the troll dark ranger trainer is.
Dark Ranger:
... Seriously?
More to come in later times.
Post by
Orranis
That's cool, and I love your writing, but one thing. STOP USING THE GOD DAMNED "-"!
There has to be at least one Shadow Ascendant in this. Oh, and the Troll Shadow Hunter/ Dark Ranger. If there isn't , GTFO.
Shadow Ascendant(or at least very close to):
Incorperal (Talent)- Release your ghostly from from your body for 30 seconds, decreasing damage done to you and regenerating 2% percent of your health over 30 seconds. While outside of your body, your ghostly form has a set of abilities to use against enemies. The effects of this ability can be canclled at any time.
Phase: Your ghostly from becomes immune to damage for 10 seconds.
Wail: You let out an ear peircing wail, lowering the hit rating of all nearby enemies in a 10 yard radius by 10 for 15 seconds.
Icy Claws: Slash at your target, dealing up to 20% weapon damage and healing yourself for half of it.
And we've got all those shadows floating around.
Shadow Hunter:
Remember who the troll dark ranger trainer is.
Dark Ranger:
... Seriously?
More to come in later times.
I'm saying he'd better be mentioned. Seriously, he's like a non-May Sue Med'An except he actually picked classes that are hell badass. I don't know why I wrote Shadow Ascendants, because Dark Ranges are basically a form of Shadow Ascendant. Ignore that.
Good job. And about the "-"? I just feel it takes away a lot of the sophistication of this writing.
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Morec0
I really just can't help it. It has somewhat become a habit for posting here. Can't even remember why I started using them.
Post by
Morec0
I really just can't help it. It has somewhat become a habit for posting here. Can't even remember why I started using them.
I remembered: its the closest thing I can get to an indentation.
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