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Post by
DeSaad
Don't you dare use the Rake!
Have fun
with Slendy
buying new games and stuff!
Watch your back.
I could try to make a story, first one ever created but still. Somebody give me a subject an I'll try to use it!
Post by
DeSaad
Damnit! Rake is sooo scary
It was a cold winter night, I was lying besides my girlfriend, she was sleeping tight. I woke up from the sound of an animal walking around the house, I could hear footsteps in the hallway. I waited abit for my eyes to get used to the darkness, then I looked at my door. I saw the most scary thing that I would ever see in my entire life. it looked like a dog, only without any hair, you could see his vines all over his body, his eyes were big, glowing with a dark, blood red. It was growling at me, showing his huge teeth, blood and flesh were between the teeth.
It felt like I screamed by lungs out, waking up everybody in the house. My girlfriend woke up with a shock, and asked me what was wrong. When she saw the look on my face, and where I was looking at, she looked too. She saw it too, just standing there, still growling at me. Almost like it didn't even hear my scream.
It then rushed off through the door. I immidiatly thought about my parents, feared for their lives. I ran out of bed into the room next to us. ( My parents' house wasen't then biggest one ) When I opened the door, I saw the 'Demon' running out, disapearing into the shadows. I turned on the light and saw my dad, bleeding to his death. My mom was in a shock, breathing unevenly. I ran to my dad, trying to make the bleeding stop. I grabbed some towels and wrapped them around him.
I carried him to my parents' car. I knew how to drive, my dad told me the basics. We made it to the hospital in time, I saw how nurses and doctors rushed to him, placing him on those hospital beds. I ran on the side of it, whispering to my dad all the time. I waited at the doors where, I wasen't permitted to go with the docters. His life was saved, and he was restoring in a private room. The docters placed him in a coma to heal.
A few days passed, when the nurse called our house. I picked up, and she said: 'Hello mister W., I call for your dad. There is something weird hapening to him. He's mumbling something about 'the Rake'. Saying that he will come for him, to finish the job.' She also spoke some more about things about his health and the wounds healing. I thanked her for calling, as we visited him again on the day, his mumbling went away when we were around his bed. When the docter came in to say we had to leave, my dad screamed: 'Son, please! Don't come back! I don't want you here when the Rake returns! My life is already doomed, I don't want to drag you with me!' Horrified as I was, I ran to my dad, but the docter stopped me. 'You must leave, now!'
The next day we got another call from the hospital, the docter said: I'm sorry to say, but your dad has passed away this night. His whole body was cut open with a knife, or teeth.' I thanked him for telling me this.
Years later, my mom has passed away from sadness of the death of my father. To this day, I go to sleep every night with the fear to wake up, and see the Rake staring at me again, this time, he will come for me. I'm sure of it.
Sorry if it's bad. First story I have ever wrote and showed anybody else. Please mind my grammar, English is not my first language. If you don't like it and think of a better way to say things, please leave some advise.
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Post by
DeSaad
Kinda nice, reasons to hate winter and snow I guess..
C'mon guys, let's get some more stories! I'll post one as soon as I find one.
Post by
BuryYourDead
I r back! Got L4D2 and the new alien vs predator game. Nice Story DeSaad. And Funshark. I liked it. Short but eery :D. I'll get to work on my other story soon.
Post by
DeSaad
Yay it was a nice story! Woooooooooooooooooot! *runs around happy* Good chioces BTW Bury!
Yeah, get your ass to the table to make another story, mewanties. =P
i thought i fail'd at making a story =(
Post by
BuryYourDead
Haha it was good DeSaad. And i can't. Pwning teh predatorz and teh marinz wif muh alien!
Post by
DeSaad
XP well good luck and stuuff, DeSaad away. I'm pretty tired. Tomorow B day party! xD Busy Busy life =|
Kthnxbb
Post by
BuryYourDead
Wazzup scary story people! The Rake is half way done :D
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366611
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Post by
Kramp
Wow, I tough my topic sank into the deep of randomness, unnoticed and now, it's back from the dead.
If you guys wants more stories,
check this out.
Post by
DeSaad
Bury, hurry up with the story! I like Rake stories. =D And why do you think that Xor? I don't remember anything like that.. I'll probably write some horror next week too, when I need to be at school again..
Post by
BuryYourDead
Police Interview
September 24th 2009
Roland Remington: Interviewed over death of his wife
Interviwer: So, Roland. Why did you kill your wife?
R: What?
I: Why did you do it? Why did you kill her?
R: I didn't kill her....
I: You took a knife and cut her eyes out, didn't you? Then you slit her throat in three places.
R: I didn't kill her, dammit!
I: Then who did, Roland? Explain.
R: You wouldn't believe me.
I: Tell me, Roland, and maybe we can prove you are innocent.
R: Fine. I was downstairs, watching the late night football highlights. Barcelona was winning. Then i eard a scream from upstairs. I ran into the kitchen and grabbed a knife from the drawer...
I: Oh, you had a knife?
R: Yes..
I: Go on.
R:... I grabbed the knife and ran upstairs. The childrens room was still closed so i ran into my bedroom and...and i saw it.
I: It?
R: Yea..it was like...a man. But he was naked and it looked as if his bones had been broken and dislocated. It looked at me and i could hear it's voice, but it didn't say a damn thing.
I: What did it say, Roland.
R: It said "I am The Rake, and she is my prey. Leave"
I: What did you do?
R: Well, i ran at it, and stabbed it. But it didn't get hurt or die. Just...growled...like a dog. Then i ran to the corner. I didn't want to...but something was telling me to. I watched as it killed my wife. He got there too late!
I: Who did? Who else was there?
R: I don't know! Some tall fella in a black suit. Like the Men in Black, you know? He walked in and that thing,almost screamed. Ran right through the window.
I: What did this man say?
R: Nothing. He looked at me, and then to my wife...I don't even think he had eyes. He just walked out.
I: And then you called the police.
R: Yea, i did.
I: Tell us the truth, Roland
R: I am telling you the bloody truth! That thin....wait, whats that noise?
Gun shots heard outside the room, followed by screams. The audio becomes severely distorted. The only sounds that were recognized were growling and then footsteps, sounding as if they belonged to dress shoes.
Post by
DeSaad
Damn Bury..Slender Man and the Rake in one story.. What the hell was Slender Man doing there? *confused*
Sheesh, I need to write some story too! =P
Right, give me a subject other then good ol' Slendy or the Rake, pl0x.
Post by
BuryYourDead
Slenderwoman? :P
What about something like Jason Vorhees? (friday te 13th)
And slendy was there becasue of my earlier assumption that Slenderman is good, but dead.
Post by
DeSaad
Yeah Slenderwoman! xD Slender Man only kills male adults and children, Slenderwoman kills female adults! :P
Ah yeah, the Slendy is good stuff because he didn't harm J or Alex. Nice.
Off the the writing!
Edit : Godamnit Kramp! One of those stories is about tripping when you're asleep, I get that allot..Damnit now I'm scared to sleep. =(
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366611
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Post by
DeSaad
I know you were, maybe I didn't watch that episode. Sorry. D:
Story BTW:
You've probably heard about the Slender Man, a humaniod male creature. My story is almost the same, only in this one, he is with a female creature.
It was a summer vacation, I was young, curious about the world, and I liked to explore. It was my dad's idea to go to Europe. We went to a country called the Netherlands. Our 'hotel' was in a heavily forrested area. There weren't enough rooms, so I had to sleep in a room with my sister. Wasen't too bad, I had a great friendship with my sister.
Anyways, we've slept for the first night, and my sister was mumbling in her sleep. I woke up from it once because she was actually talking, not the normal gibberish. She said: 'Run mom, she's coming from you!' She probably had a nightmare, as soon she quited mumbling and was sleaping peacefully again. The next day at breakfast, she was very quiet. We decided to go on a little tour around the forest, it was very diffirent then were we live. Halfway through the trip, my sister started to scream and pointed at the tree's. She said that she saw a tall woman walking around, taller then a normal human. My parents said it was probably just the shadows playing tricks with her mind, and that she should forget about it. I walked next to her, my arm over her shoulders trying to comfort her. I said: 'I heard you talking last night, what was your dream about?' She told me about her dream, that there was a female 'thing' chasing our mom. That it had no visable face, it was runing after her in a formal dress, black and white. Also that it was very thin, and it could stretch its arms out very far. I told her it sounded like the Slender Man myth we have where we live. She thought about it, and said that i was right. I gave her a hug and said that it's just a dream, that she should forget about it.
The other night, i woke up again. Not from my sister this time, but from my mom screaming. My sister also woke up, and looked at me with big, wet and scared eyes. I ran to our parents room, seeing the door as already open. I searched for the light switch next to the door, found it and turned the lights on. I saw my dad, dead. His head was lying on the ground. I saw the Slender Man, it was him. He did exist after all, he walked towards me, his tentacles streched out. It freaked me out, but at the same time it comforted me in a way. I then looked at my mom, she was holded up in the air by a woman. She matched the description that my sister gave me. It was the Slenderwoman, a famle version of the creature that was only a few meter's away from me now. We were all going to die that night. If it wasen't for the courage of my sister. My dad always carried a gun with him. Mu sister ran downstairs instead of following me into my parents room. I heard a gunshot behind me, and then saw the Slender Man fall over, green blood was coming out of a whole in his head. She then ran towards the Slenderwoman, ready to shoot her too. She was prepared, and was angered after seeing my sis shooting her brother. Another tantacle grew from her back, and grabbed my sister. She too, was then being holded in the air, my mom's head was already paler then the clearest white. She was already dead. I grabbed the gun, and shot the Slenderwoman in her head, just as my sister did with the Slender Man. The strange thing is, she didn't even try to stop me, it was like she couldn't even touch me.
Years later, my sister and I haven't told anybody what happened that night. We were both orphans, and were taken to some rich guy's house together. I don't think they monsters died that night. People still die from unknows reason, I think they are only leaving us alone...
This is takes from an dairy.
1 year later, the boy and his sister's heads were found. The were eyeless, noseless, their mouths couldn't be opened, their ears were cut off, and their hair was shaved off.. They did get them after all.
Worse then my last one IMO.
EDIT : gammar fail in the story =(
Post by
BuryYourDead
I know you were, maybe I didn't watch that episode. Sorry. D:
Story BTW:
You've probably heard about the Slender Man, a humaniod male creature. My story is almost the same, only in this one, he is with a female creature.
It was a summer vacation, I was young, curious about the world, and I liked to explore. It was my dad's idea to go to Europe. We went to a country called the Netherlands. Our 'hotel' was in a heavily forrested area. There weren't enough rooms, so I had to sleep in a room with my sister. Wasen't too bad, I had a great friendship with my sister.
Anyways, we've slept for the first night, and my sister was mumbling in her sleep. I woke up from it once because she was actually talking, not the normal gibberish. She said: 'Run mom, she's coming from you!' She probably had a nightmare, as soon she quited mumbling and was sleaping peacefully again. The next day at breakfast, she was very quiet. We decided to go on a little tour around the forest, it was very diffirent then were we live. Halfway through the trip, my sister started to scream and pointed at the tree's. She said that she saw a tall woman walking around, taller then a normal human. My parents said it was probably just the shadows playing tricks with her mind, and that she should forget about it. I walked next to her, my arm over her shoulders trying to comfort her. I said: 'I heard you talking last night, what was your dream about?' She told me about her dream, that there was a female 'thing' chasing our mom. That it had no visable face, it was runing after her in a formal dress, black and white. Also that it was very thin, and it could stretch its arms out very far. I told her it sounded like the Slender Man myth we have where we live. She thought about it, and said that i was right. I gave her a hug and said that it's just a dream, that she should forget about it.
The other night, i woke up again. Not from my sister this time, but from my mom screaming. My sister also woke up, and looked at me with big, wet and scared eyes. I ran to our parents room, seeing the door as already open. I searched for the light switch next to the door, found it and turned the lights on. I saw my dad, dead. His head was lying on the ground. I saw the Slender Man, it was him. He did exist after all, he walked towards me, his tentacles streched out. It freaked me out, but at the same time it comforted me in a way. I then looked at my mom, she was holded up in the air by a woman. She matched the description that my sister gave me. It was the Slenderwoman, a famle version of the creature that was only a few meter's away from me now. We were all going to die that night. If it wasen't for the courage of my sister. My dad always carried a gun with him. Mu sister ran downstairs instead of following me into my parents room. I heard a gunshot behind me, and then saw the Slender Man fall over, green blood was coming out of a whole in his head. She then ran towards the Slenderwoman, ready to shoot her too. She was prepared, and was angered after seeing my sis shooting her brother. Another tantacle grew from her back, and grabbed my sister. She too, was then being holded in the air, my mom's head was already paler then the clearest white. She was already dead. I grabbed the gun, and shot the Slenderwoman in her head, just as my sister did with the Slender Man. The strange thing is, she didn't even try to stop me, it was like she couldn't even touch me.
Years later, my sister and I haven't told anybody what happened that night. We were both orphans, and were taken to some rich guy's house together. I don't think they monsters died that night. People still die from unknows reason, I think they are only leaving us alone...
This is takes from an dairy.
1 year later, the boy and his sister's heads were found. The were eyeless, noseless, their mouths couldn't be opened, their ears were cut off, and their hair was shaved off.. They did get them after all.
Worse then my last one IMO.
EDIT : gammar fail in the story =(
Holy Hell. That was awesome :D. I shall have to surpass this...but how? Hmm....
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