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Monday
That was a joke.
I think not.
I liked it, though. I'm not particularly sure whether I enjoyed the ending or not, but eh.
I saw a couple places where I would insert commas, or italicize stuff, but otherwise it looked good (and I'm also known to overuse commas).
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Behelich
Pretty much what Fund said. Typos and - in just a couple of places - weird word order aside, a very enjoyable read.
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