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The Valley of Trials Page 1
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Post by
Eveko
Somewhere in Silvermoon an Blood Elf shouted surprised
"What you can't be serious Lor'Themar Theron , i am
a grand magister you cant send me to the valley of
trials to become a warrior!"
He replied :
"I am very serious , I have discused this with
Thrall and High Overlord Saurfang will train you"
The Magister ironically said :
"You mean kill..."
Lor'Themar said :
" Um what?"
"No nothing "
The Magister walked to the telleportation orb and went to
the Undercity and took the Zeppelin to Durotar. There at the tower
was Saurfang . They first just looked in the eyes and the elf drew
a long sigh.
Saurfang replied and spited on the floor : "Does my presence bother you? "
The elf quickly replied :
" no nothing , it a honor to meet such a strong warrior"
He replied in disbelief :
"Honor? You a mere mage , youre worse than
the shadow council .You know nothing of it its my job to teach you
about honor and get you familiar with a sword and axe "
A few moments of walking in durotar just past razor hill
Saurfang stops and says while giving a strange medalion
:
"Wear this necklase"
The elf wore the necklase and suddenly he lost his affinity over
arcane magic and replied confused :"What? what is this"
Saurfang said while scratching his head
" I dont know
Sul'Jin told me to give to you and i did"
After reaching the valley of trials Saurfang walked to Zureetha Fargaze and asked her " Is the sparing ring ready? And by the way how are thing with the burning blade coven?"
She replied :
" Nothing much with the coven our initiates do quick work with them so they are no big threat. The sparing ring is ready"
Saurfang said :
" Great , come over here Elf.Thats what i am
gonna call you from now on. Lets get started , wear this mail armor
and walk around the valley for 5 hours i will put some blood on you
so the worgs can give you a good motive"
So Elf wore the armor and soon he felt the weight. But with
no time to think Saurfang throws blood on him and the worgs
started chancing him
The elf thought :
"Damn what the hell am i doing here? Oh dear they are going to reach me! i cant blink i cant blink!"
The worgs soon reach him but Saurfang stops the wolfs and says
:
"When worgs almost reach you i will stop them and release them again when you gain a fair distance, but remember i wont stop them if you stop running , ...so get moving because these worgs wont have mercy "
And so the elf did this running practise for about 5 days for 5 hours each day and ending up with 10 minor wounds cause by tripping around the rocks. His body was numb from the weight of the armor. As he fell a sleep he
wondered what he was doing here
-End of page 1
Post by
Gnub
Sorry, but there is no way I can take a story serious that involves such raping of the language. Using "omg" as an actual saying - in fan fiction? No, just no.
Post by
Morec0
I agree with Gnubigena, make the changes to make this story more proper(?) and I'll change this.
EDIT: Yes, I understand your english isn't that good, but those slang words don't belong there.
Post by
Eveko
ok i will look them up , thought they would be funny .
Post by
Eveko
I did some changes if i missed something please do say :)
Post by
Biggrouse
eh.. not really that good in my opinion
Post by
Morec0
eh.. not really that good in my opinion
Perhapes, but I think it has the possibility to go places, and I salute you, Eveko, for putting your story in the same time that WoW takes place.
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