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And They Say Madness Echoes - Requiem of Stone [Part Seven]
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I liked it, although I have two problems.
If you're writing dialogue such as "What are you doing? Your going to hurt yourself like that." the man said and walked over to her. Make sure to use a comma in the dialogue. I noticed you did it correctly most of the time, so it's probably a typo, but I've seen it a couple times. Do you write this in Word?
Otherwise, besides that slight ramble, I'm liking this a lot. Very different from the usual, and it flows well.
E: Formatting error #1D10T.
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I don't my word decides to suffer an error and shut down when I try to mess with it now, and yea it was just typo's thanks for pointing that out. /blame on lag.
Ah, k. I would try and fix Word if possible. It is a lifesaver when it points out small grammar errors I might miss, along with typos. The nice thing about Word is that it'll point out not only misspelled words, but also words used in the incorrect context from typos, and will change it to the correct one.
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Great chapter Light, let us hope you saved the best for last (topping the other great ones of course!)
One small error, in the part that Funden quoted, it should be a "you're" instead of "your".
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