first try too write a story, [The tale of arados, knight of the ebon blade] {part 1}

Post by barthem

i have readed enough of these stories here in lore and roleplaying and im going too try too write my own storie, please tell me what you think of it
and btw english isnt my primary langue and i tryed too make it as readable as posibible, so if you only wanted too post a OMG HE SPELLED A WORD WRONG LOLZ THE NOOB please get out

enjoy and please tell me what you find of it.
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Deaths embrace, het verhaal van een doods ridder

hello my name is arados, i am a champion of the horde and a former member of the ebon blade, yes im a death knight, a knight of shadow, death and destruction.
Perhaps is monster a better word too describe what i have done in my past
I wasnt always a killing machine of death and destruction, once, a long time ago, i was once a warrior of the light.
I fought for what i believed in, the power of life, the strenght of love and the way of the light.
I was a fool too believe that.

I grew up in goldshire in elwynn forest, the only thing i had too worry about was what we would eat tonight and if i would be the first too catch that legendairy big fish in the crystal lake that everybody was talking about.
Jes, it was a good time, no things too worry about, and no death, only life.

Around my 12th life year my parents tought finaly i was big enough too go hunting with my dad, aah i still remember that time that i killing my first boar, i was so exited. While hunting i founded out that i was a compleet desaster with a bow, but i was very handy with a sword.
Before i knew it i went training with my sword instead of fishing, instead of laying in the grass and watching the sky and all his coulds i began too exercise with my sword with the other boys in goldshire.
My dad saw that i was getting better and better with the art of swordfighting and one day he took me too Brother Wilhelm, a paladin from the church of light that was on his eternal quest too teach youngblood the way of the light, brother wilhelm started too teach me the way of the light too.

At first i founded it needless too learn how too heal people with the power of the light, or create a shield of light so i couldnt get hit by a rain of arrows, i had my shield too block these arrows didnt i?
all i wanted was too learn how to use the light too defeat my enemie and how to use it to destroy my foe's, brother willhelm kept saying that the light wasnt about defeating your enemies, but it was defending the ones your loved.

I didnt understood what i meant untill one day i was on a mission of mashal dughang too investegate the rumors of a nearby mine was getting overunned by spiders, just when i was nearly by the mine i heard a scream and a yell for help.

I ran towers the sound too hear who it was, it was innkeeper farley, he was laying on the ground with a pack of wolfs serounding him, it semt that his leg broken and he couldnt move.
I dont realy know what happened next, the only thing i know is that i panic and at the same time i felt a determination in me too help the innkeeper.
All of a sudden i felt a warm light spreading across my body, before i knew it i ran towers tthe wolf that was just aboud too charge the innkeeper, i raised my blade and with a flash of light it struck the wolfs head and the wolf felt down,
the next moment the rest of the pack attacks me, with a flash of light i raised my blade again and one by one those wolfs fell,
afther the battle i dropped my blade in amazement, for the first time the light heeded my call and assisted me in battle!
With adranaline is still rushing trough my blood i look too the half unconscious innkeeper, i had too get him too goldshire before more wolfs would smell a tasty wounded pray.
Just when i wanted too lift him up and help him walk i saw that he had a nasty bite wound in his leg.
When i tryed too lift him and carry him too goldshire he screamings i agony and becomes even more pale then he already was, it semt that if couldnt move the now unconscious innkeeper he would probably have bleeded too dead before we even got too the road.
Just when i become desperatly and was nearly praying for someone too help us i feel that same warm power in my hands.
All of a sudden my hands start too glow, i looked shocked at them, but then without thinking i move my hands too his leg and feel this warm power stream from my hands too the wound.
The light heeded my prayer and aided me when i needed its help the most

From that moment i began the understand the way of the light more and more
brother wilhelm sayt that i had learned enough of him and that the only way too become stronger was too go away from my homeland and learn from other people and other creatures.
i did what he said, i traveled across the kingdome of stormwind, i saw amazing things, i helped alot of people, and yet from every fight, from every person that i helped, i learned a little and afther many battles and quests i became a fully learned paladin, a warrior of the light that would never tought he ever would become a knight of the shadow.
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end part one

first try too write a story, [The tale of arados, knight of the ebon blade] {part 1}

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